Doc: Improve shallow depth wording

Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set
and the depth measure. Use two sentences.

Signed-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
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Philip Oakley 2012-09-16 11:57:58 +01:00 committed by Junio C Hamano
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@ -259,8 +259,10 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped.
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If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute
the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting
at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each
the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set
of commits start at the client's wants.
The server writes 'shallow' lines for each
commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes
an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is
shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth