Fixed some grammatical errors in git-rebase.txt documentation.

Generally, the dependent clause "for example" is suffixed with a comma.
Used present tense where appropriate to be consistent with the other
paragraphs.

Rewrote the paragraph in the second hunk to be more clear.

Signed-off-by: Garry Dolley <gdolley@ucla.edu>
Signed-off-by: Shawn O. Pearce <spearce@spearce.org>
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Garry Dolley 2008-09-24 02:51:27 -07:00 committed by Shawn O. Pearce
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@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ branch to another, to pretend that you forked the topic branch
from the latter branch, using `rebase --onto`.
First let's assume your 'topic' is based on branch 'next'.
For example feature developed in 'topic' depends on some
For example, a feature developed in 'topic' depends on some
functionality which is found in 'next'.
------------
@ -103,9 +103,9 @@ functionality which is found in 'next'.
o---o---o topic
------------
We would want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master',
for example because the functionality 'topic' branch depend on
got merged into more stable 'master' branch, like this:
We want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master'; for example,
because the functionality on which 'topic' depends was merged into the
more stable 'master' branch. We want our tree to look like this:
------------
o---o---o---o---o master